Quan's Bleach FF: The Trillion-Year Revenge

So basically this is a Bleach FF I decided to write a few days ago because I got bored. I decided that maybe I'd post it on here to see what other people think since I'll feel like a complete idiot if I read this to anyone IRL. The FF is based of canon Bleach since I really don't know enough about BG's Alternate Universe to write anything based on it. I may think about something like that in the future, however.

Here's the main idea behind the story: 

It takes place 500 years after the events of canon Bleach. There are a few of the same captains as canon, but most of them no longer exist, and they've been replaced. The Captains of the 3rd, 5th, and 9th Divisions, as well as the Kidou Corps Commander, have been arrested and sentenced to execution for being Vaizards, something made once again illegal by the re-etablished Central 46 as well as the new Captain-Commander. As such, those captains were also replaced by characters I made up. Because of recent war-like movements by Las Noches, the Zero Division has become involved with the Gotei 13. Its Captain, Quan Shiomori (not the same as my BG character), is now effectively in charge of Seiretei because of this.

Quan decided to take care of this Zero Division operation personally because he has a score to settle. A trillion years ago, the Soul King created Quan Shiomori as a Shinigami, along with Shiryu, his Zanpakuto. Because one Zero Division member who later created the Asauchi wasn't even a thought yet, Quan's Zanpakuto was very different from any others. Along with Quan, the Soul King created the first Arrancar. Her name was Yuki Kanashimi. Her and Quan fought many times in the darkness that existed before Creation, growing immensely more powerful in the hundreds of million years between each fight. Now, Yuki is the Primera Espada, and she hasn't forgotten Quan. The two are quite simply a huge battle waiting to happen. Soon, the Captain of Zero Division and the Primera Espada will fight for the final time.

Arrancar, Shinigami, and humans alike have become much stronger over the last 500 years. Quan, for example, can use seven releases past Bankai plus a final form. The CC, Zero Division members, and the High Judge of Central 46 can each use four releases. The Primera Espada has four releases past normal Resurrección, and the Segunda, Tercera, and Cuarto all have three. Humans have also greatly increased their abilities. 

Now, here are the powerful and notable characters:

GOTEI 13:

1st Division:

• Captain and Captain-Commander: Kosuke Iyanaga
• Vice-Captain: TBA

2nd Division/Onmitsukido:

• Captain: Soi Fon
• VC: Sou Kentaro

3rd Division/Senzaikyu Guards:

• Captain: Kyoukai Suzumori
• VC: Kai Uehara

4th Division/Hospital:

• Captain: Isane Kotetsu
• VC: Ai Kawamura

5th Division:

• Captain: Shin Sakamoto
• VC: TBA

6th Division/Prison Management:

• Captain: Byakuya Kuchiki
• VC: Renji Abarai

7th Division:

• Captain: Rukia Kuchiki
• VC: Tetsuzaemon Iba

8th Division:

• Captain: Shunsui Kyouraku
• VC: Akiyoku Nakajima

9th Division:

• Captain: Shuhei Hisagi
• VC: Ren Shikimori

10th Division:

• Captain: Toshirou Hitsugaya
• VC: Rangiku Matsumoto

11th Division/Operational Security Force:

• Captain: Kenpachi Zaraki
• VC: Saigyo Kuchiki

12th Division/R&D Dept.:

• Captain: Kisuke Urahara
• VC: Ino Nakamura

13th Division:

• Captain: Juushirou Ukitake
• VC: Jun'ya Iyanaga

Kidou Corps:

• Commander: Sai Shin'etsu
• Lieutenant: Maki Konami

ZERO DIVISION:

• Captain: Quan Shiomori
• Lieutenant: Isshin Kurosaki
• 3rd Seat: Ichigo Kurosaki

Other Notable Members:

• Gin Ichimaru (Yep, I made him survive Aizen)
• Mayuri Kurotsuchi

HUECO MUNDO:

Primera: Yuki Kanashimi - Loneliness

Segunda: Carlos Ramirez - Betrayal

Tercera: Fernando Martinez - Greed

Cuarto: Yui Takai - Destruction

Quinto: Sekai Nanashii - Cruelty

Sesta: Pedro Amaya - Sacrifice

Séptima: Jose Hidalgo - Insanity

Octava: Pablo Hernandez - Age

Novena: Ai Minamoto - Fear

Décimo/Cero: Miguel Guerra - Rage

Fracciónes:

Arrancar Number 13 - Ken Gutierrez (Fraccion of Primera Espada)

ROGUES:

Genryusai-Shigekuni Yamamoto (Missing in Action, suspected to be held in Hueco Mundo)

Shinji Hirako (Escaped Capture)

Now, without further ado, time to begin!

PROLOGUE

Senzaikyu, center of Seiretei

11:44 PM, 29 April, 2514 AD

An unbelievable pressure filled the air. All those in Seiretei felt it, and all were shocked by its intensity save one. Quan Shiomori was in the First Division compound when he felt the Reiatsu. "Someone's here," thought the Shinigami as he grabbed his sheathed Zanpakuto off a table, tucked it into his obi sash and rushed toward the Senzaikyu. Several Vaizards were imprisoned there, and if they got out, it would say bad things about Quan's ability as Captain of Zero Division.

At the Senzaikyu the two Third Division members assigned to guard the doors couldn't move. They were frozen in place by the horrific Reiatsu of the woman in front of them. Her name was Yuki Kanashimi and she was the Primera Espada. The two Third Division men gripped the hilts of their Zanpakuto, but it was far too late. There was a sound like a sonic boom, and the next instant, both men were ripped open and lying facedown in a widening pool of blood. The Primera stood in front of the Senzaikyu's door with blood dripping from her left hand and a smile on her face. A moment later, there was a flash of purple Reishi and half of the Senzaikyu's bottom floor was quite simply gone. With a mere Bala, Yuki had blown it away. She was about to step inside, but someone was suddenly blocking her way.

Quan Shiomori stood in front of the Primera Espada with his drawn Zanpakuto in his hand. "What are you here for?" he asked. "I'm getting these Vaizards the hell out of here since you lot aren't treating them too nicely and they've arranged to serve us," replied Yuki Kanashimi. "I can't let you do that," said Quan. "Fine," said the Primera. She used Sonido, lunging forward to attack. Quan barely parried the sword slash before striking out with his own weapon. The strike was in turn parried. However, the epic confrontation was going to have to wait until another time. Both combatants could feel the Reiatsu of a number of Zero Division members and the Captain-Commander drawing closer.

A purple Cero blasted straight at Quan, giving him maybe a second to react. "Soren Soukatsui!!" he yelled, sending a twin blast of blue fire to neutralize the Cero. Blue and purple Reiatsu clashed in a violent explosion before canceling each other out. Neither being's attack hurt its target. The smoke cleared just in time for Quan to see a Garganta closing. "Crap..." thought Quan. "What, you sad you just let her go?" asked a voice in his head. It was Shiryu, his Zanpakuto spirit. "What do you mean?" asked Quan. "Well, she was very attractive, and I thought maybe you--" began Shiryu, but Quan cut him off. "Don't ever say something like that again!! It's treachery to say that and I won't have my own partner in battle be a traitor," replied the Zero Division's captain. He could hear Shiryu laughing at him inside his head. Even worse, his cheeks turned slightly red just as the other Captains arrived. What a mess...

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Welk that's the end of the prologue, I'll see about starting Chapter 1 soon. I hope you guys like this!