I'm looking for a shinigami to have been friends with Levi in his past life as a fourth division shinigami. The only real details from his history at that time was that he got trapped in Hueco Mundo during a mission and got an inner hollow from eating hollow meat while he was there. Obviously when he got back he would have been acting strange, but that's also left pretty open. He had a best friend named Nishiki, who was a business man in the rukongai, and a girlfriend named Aki, who cheated on him with Nishiki before he disappeared during the King's Key Eclipse.
What I need is basically someone to tell him about how he has changed and how it is a bad thing, beyond the obvious hollow issue. How he was happier back then.
From there it's pretty open. If you want to take the obvious course and be a long term rival, I'm down for that. If you want to try to be friends again and make Levi see the light, I'm down for that too. If you want to somehow do both, I'm definitely down for that.
The only "requirement" I have here is that you intend to stick around. If things go as planned this character is going to be very important for Levi's long-term development, so I really need you to stick around for that.
As for the possibility of other races filling this role; I don't see how it could work, but if you have an idea I'm more than willing to listen.
The only real details from his history at that time was that he got trapped in Hueco Mundo during a mission and got an inner hollow from eating hollow meat while he was there.
Just thought you should know that this isn't even remotely how it works.
The only real details from his history at that time was that he got trapped in Hueco Mundo during a mission and got an inner hollow from eating hollow meat while he was there.
Just thought you should know that this isn't even remotely how it works.
Indeed,Chie ate hollow meat for weeks and all that happened was she threw up on Shun.
Post by Hazuki Tsukimiya on Dec 27, 2016 13:01:52 GMT -5
"ate" hollow "meat" you say
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The only real details from his history at that time was that he got trapped in Hueco Mundo during a mission and got an inner hollow from eating hollow meat while he was there.
Just thought you should know that this isn't even remotely how it works.
Well the app got passed, so I guess it is now.
Although I have been putting serious consideration into revamping his history if nothing else because... well it sucks.
"Hi, I'm a stone cold son of a b**** who kidnaps innocent young women and give zero damns for whatever any of your concerns are!"
Post by Consequence on Dec 27, 2016 15:10:50 GMT -5
I'll be happy to personally retcon that mistake into oblivion.
Generally, app-staff doesn't concern themselves with altering the details of your story unless it relates to the justification of a power, or core personality trait, or is factually wrong like "I was in Division 12". The fact that you had an IH as part of eventually becoming an Arrancar was a probably an "uhh...okay, whatever" moment for the grader that they didn't feel the need to stop you over. A means to an end, and it appeared to be little more.
If it's something you're going to use in the future, it's important you have it right. If it'll literally never come up again, there is some flexibility depending on the severity.
Since you're bringing up a thing to use in the future, it is now important that we get it right.
Last Edit: Dec 27, 2016 15:11:20 GMT -5 by Consequence
I'll be happy to personally retcon that mistake into oblivion.
Generally, app-staff doesn't concern themselves with altering the details of your story unless it relates to the justification of a power, or core personality trait, or is factually wrong like "I was in Division 12". The fact that you had an IH as part of eventually becoming an Arrancar was a probably an "uhh...okay, whatever" moment for the grader that they didn't feel the need to stop you over. A means to an end, and it appeared to be little more.
If it's something you're going to use in the future, it's important you have it right. If it'll literally never come up again, there is some flexibility depending on the severity.
Since you're bringing up a thing to use in the future, it is now important that we get it right.
Point taken. Expect an app regrade request in the near future.
"Hi, I'm a stone cold son of a b**** who kidnaps innocent young women and give zero damns for whatever any of your concerns are!"
There is no nation of you, there is no nation of me Our only nation lives in lucid dreams Lucid dreams, I’m livin’ in lucid dreams I’m livin’ on shortwave streams tonight
There is no nation of you, there is no nation of me Our only nation lives in lucid dreams Lucid dreams, I’m livin’ in lucid dreams I’m livin’ on shortwave streams tonight
Levi's history is fixed, so this is a thing again. Most important changes: Levi never came back to SS after getting his inner hollow, so no one knows what happened to him, and Nishiki and Aki are alive now. (OP has been edited.
Anyone interested?
"Hi, I'm a stone cold son of a b**** who kidnaps innocent young women and give zero damns for whatever any of your concerns are!"