Phoenix [ARRANCAR]

Party time!


lets see what I can do with 1900 GP,


Stats:

1000 gp on Rei,

Rei: 100

Strength: 40

Defense: 30

Speed: 10

Spirit: 20



Skills:

900 spent

Raising the following

Hollow resonance: journeyman (200) to expert (400) [200 spent]

Zanjutsu: Novice (100) to expert (400) [300 spent]

Regeneration: Nothing (0, what else would nothing be?) to expert (400) [400]

=900


Unused GP / Total GP: 00 / 3400
GP Spent on Stats: 2000
GP Spent on Skills: 1400

Approved.

bleach-gotei.com/thread/20432

Alright, let's divide this 1900 gp.

Reieatsu perception from None all the way to expert for 400


Sonido to journeyman for 200 

Hakuda to journeyman for 200



Dumping the remaining 1100 into 55 reiatsu

Reiatsu: 155

Strength: 70

Defense: 30

Speed: 20

Spirit 25


total gp 5,300

Please post your updated banked/total. I can't approve it without that.

This is a courtesy post to say you need to update your Stats/Skills page with the appropriate total GP of: 3400

edited properly, I doubt there's a loose end

the loose end is that you need to update to 3.0 skills

inactive. post here to reactivate.

Alright, I edited my stats for 3.0 and fixed up my total gp. Also may I please return to Bleach-Gotei?

STATS, SKILLS, AND POWERS
[ STRENGTH OF THE WORLD ]
First Release
Power Effects: iEffects: Phoenix sets the entire arena in a fiery inferno. Those within this inferno no longer have their dodge checks affected by distance, allowing Phoenix to strike ranged enemies as if they were in melee range. This effect can be ignored if the target has advantage in a relevant defending skill (I.E. Resonance if using a power to fight against the flames, or Zanjutsu if using a weapon) to Phoenix's Resonance.


Power Description: Channeling the crimson flames from the core of her very soul, Phoenix uses her blade as a focal point for control purposes. In the way of techniques, the power does not offer much room for design at this stage as Phoenix can either slash or strike to launch a bolt of fire, or ignite her blade at an appropriate incident to cause damage.

Second Release
Power Effects: With her Resurrección, Phoenix now gains the ability to manipulate and use her flames to attack. This allows her to strike as if in Melee range from anywhere within her flames reach. The flames use a hybrid check of Spirit and Hollow Evolution vs. the target's relevant defending skill. If the target can suppress the flames (as seen in the first release effects), then Phoenix's fire attacks are affected by normal range differences.



Power Description: Die and return, Sangre Fenix. Phoenix's body gets covered in scale like feathers surrounding her torso, arms from just bellow the shoulder down to the sharp claw like hands and similar claws on her feet. Her torso has feathers wrapped around which mold into a white scale like armor exposing the shoulder line. Her backside exposed from halfway down her lower back to her neck. On her upper back, a large mount connected to her spine bound by what appears to be claw like spikes. On either side of the mound are large bone wings giving off an angelic form, which after a moment of full release ignites in crimson flame and becomes fire wings.

Third Release
Power Effects: The mechanical portion of your power. Exclude any flavor text and simply tell us what your power does.
Power Description: Flavor text that helps separate you from the rest. This can include more complex applications of the power, as well as special techniques your character is known for using with it.

[ HONED POTENTIAL ]
Reiatsu: 165
Strength: 45 (+20 res)
Defense: 30
Speed: 20
Spirit: 70 (+20 res)

Zanjutsu: 400 [ Expert ]
Hakuda: 200 [ Journeyman]
Sonido: 200 [ Journeyman ]
Reiatsu Perception: 400 [ Expert ]
Hollow Evolution: 400 [ Expert ]
Shunko 100 [ Novice ]
Regeneration/: 300 [ Proficient ]


[ ROAD TRAVELLED ]
Unused GP / Total GP: 00 / 5300
GP Spent on Stats: 3300
GP Spent on Skills: 2000

everything looks good, but your powers are pretty meh. they don't actually... do anything. creating fire is cool, and attacking with it just as cool, but i think there's more you can do with it. here's what i'm thinking:

First Release
Effects: Phoenix sets the entire arena in a fiery inferno. Those within this inferno no longer have their dodge checks affected by distance, allowing Phoenix to strike ranged enemies as if they were in melee range. This effect can be ignored if the target has advantage in a relevant defending skill (I.E. Resonance if using a power to fight against the flames, or Zanjutsu if using a weapon) to Phoenix's Resonance.

Second Release
Effects: With her Resurrección, Phoenix now gains the ability to manipulate and use her flames to attack. This allows her to strike as if in Melee range from anywhere within her flames reach. The flames use a hybrid check of Spirit and Hollow Evolution vs. the target's relevant defending skill. If the target can suppress the flames (as seen in the first release effects), then Phoenix's fire attacks are affected by normal range differences.

the only thing about these powers is they favor a spirit build, so you might want to consider swapping your strength and spirit stats to make better use of your powers. if you do that, i'd also recommend taking shunkō to help fit your build as well. maybe drop gonzui in favor of it. but these are just suggestions, so don't take my word as law here.

oh, and don't forget that once you complete a thread post time skip, you get to claim an additional 1k gp with the thread to account for the time change.

anyways, you're all set. just lemme know what you wanna do with your powers.

I did make the recommended changes to power, swapped gonzui for shunkou, and switched my spirit and strength before I did anything meaningful.

you're all set