Post by Grim on Nov 2, 2017 3:22:23 GMT -5
SHIMIZU, SHIGERU
HOLLOW
[ AT A GLANCE ]
Human Name: Shimizu Shigeru, 清水 茂
Age / Apparent Age: 250 years old.
Gender: Unknown, presumed male however a lack of genitals makes this hard to grasp.
Height & Weight: Standing on both back legs: 6'6". Roughly weighs 160lbs however due to the constant shifting mass it is hard to get a definitive number.
Hair & Eye Color: His fur is a dark black and eyes a scarlet red.
Positive Traits: Loyal, Honorable, Clever, Decisive, Obedient.
Negative Traits: Dependent, Intolerant, Reckless, Feisty, Vengeful.
Loyalties: Las Noches.
Snapshots:
1767: Born.
1780: Stop attending school to look after parents who are terminally ill, continued studies at home.
1787: Dies due to illness and not looking after himself.
1792: Chain of Fate corrodes and becomes a base Hollow
1852: Evolves into a Gillian
1900: Becomes the Dominant personality as Grim.
2016: Evolves into a Adjuchas.
2017: Wanders various outskirts of Las Noches.
[ ON THE SURFACE ]
Physical Description: Describe how your character looks, sounds, smells, and acts like. Try to focus on the key aspects of a character, such as their body build, demeanor, and vocal patterns, and stray away from useless information that won’t be brought up in a typical thread. This description should be very cleanly written, but not come off as a checklist of features. Try to mesh all of the parts together to create a coherent thought.
Spiritual Description: Similar to above, though this focuses on the spiritual presence of your character. This would be how their Reiatsu appears and/or feels when they release it. Typically, Reiatsu can invoke a feeling of sorts and often takes on a ghostly appearance. Reiatsu cannot be touched or molded and simply serves as dramatic effect.
[ BEHIND THE EYES ]
Personality: Describe who your character is and how they interact with the world. This doesn’t necessarily include what they like or dislike, unless those opinions have an actual effect on the character. That is to say, including that they like to watch it rain is rather useless, however saying they are a hollow sympathizer is certainly worth mentioning. Take into consideration things that will actually be relevant to the story you’re telling and information other thread partners would want to see out of your character. This is where you justify the things you want to do.
Goals & Achievements: This is where you briefly talk about things your character has done in the past, or things they want to do. Please note that you cannot have had any previous position of notable power (such as lieutenant or captain), however mentioning that you were once a seated officer in a certain division is very relevant information. This is a very good place to start a foundation of your story and make notes on the general direction of where you want to go with your character. Above all else, keep your goals reasonable; it was be a little ludicrous to go out the gate wanting to be Captain Commander. However, feel free to update this as you progress, so players have easy access to your current plans and accomplishments.
[ GUARDIAN ANGEL ]
Aspect of Death: Sacrifice is a word that defines Grim's life as a human in one word. The young male spent all his life doing what he needed to do for his career and family even if he didn't like it, yielding any free time or hobbies he once had to take care of his sick mother and father. Leaving school early and forgoing a decent education the beasts entire existence pre-hollow was lived to serve others and fulfill their happiness while neglecting his own problems and illness. The sacrifice's Grim has made back then as a Human has now carried over to a Hollow, as the beast is a loyal dog that will fight for Las Noches until the bitter end, a sense of duty causes Grim to wander the barren sands defending those weaker than him even if it means sacrificing himself to save the day.
Power: A brief (1-2 sentences) summary of your power. This only needs to be as complex or as simple as you want it to be, but remember that the full write up belongs in your second post!
Zanpakutō: An empty blade that the Arrancar fight with. This weapon can come in just about any form and typically takes on a monstrous, or dangerous vibe. There is no standard, though typically it is a bladed weapon of some sort.
[ LEGACY CREATED ]
Origin: Each of these three sections should be at least a full paragraph (5-7 complete sentences). In your origin, you should talk about where your character was born, describe their death and talk about their time as a base Hollow. This should stop before your character has become conscious and is able to think about their actions.
Rise to Power: Rise to Power should include the road up to breaking the hollow mask as well as the logic behind doing that. During this phase is when you would talk about how your character has gotten use to being an Arrancar after being a monster for so long.
Call to Action: This is where you talk about the event(s) that made your character shift from an NPC to a player character. For whatever reason, they need to be pulled away from the daily grind and put into the spotlight. In this section, you’ll want to highlight that event(s) and justify why your character is they way they are today.
HOLLOW
Human Name: Shimizu Shigeru, 清水 茂
Age / Apparent Age: 250 years old.
Gender: Unknown, presumed male however a lack of genitals makes this hard to grasp.
Height & Weight: Standing on both back legs: 6'6". Roughly weighs 160lbs however due to the constant shifting mass it is hard to get a definitive number.
Hair & Eye Color: His fur is a dark black and eyes a scarlet red.
Positive Traits: Loyal, Honorable, Clever, Decisive, Obedient.
Negative Traits: Dependent, Intolerant, Reckless, Feisty, Vengeful.
Loyalties: Las Noches.
Snapshots:
1767: Born.
1780: Stop attending school to look after parents who are terminally ill, continued studies at home.
1787: Dies due to illness and not looking after himself.
1792: Chain of Fate corrodes and becomes a base Hollow
1852: Evolves into a Gillian
1900: Becomes the Dominant personality as Grim.
2016: Evolves into a Adjuchas.
2017: Wanders various outskirts of Las Noches.
[ ON THE SURFACE ]
Physical Description: Describe how your character looks, sounds, smells, and acts like. Try to focus on the key aspects of a character, such as their body build, demeanor, and vocal patterns, and stray away from useless information that won’t be brought up in a typical thread. This description should be very cleanly written, but not come off as a checklist of features. Try to mesh all of the parts together to create a coherent thought.
Spiritual Description: Similar to above, though this focuses on the spiritual presence of your character. This would be how their Reiatsu appears and/or feels when they release it. Typically, Reiatsu can invoke a feeling of sorts and often takes on a ghostly appearance. Reiatsu cannot be touched or molded and simply serves as dramatic effect.
[ BEHIND THE EYES ]
Personality: Describe who your character is and how they interact with the world. This doesn’t necessarily include what they like or dislike, unless those opinions have an actual effect on the character. That is to say, including that they like to watch it rain is rather useless, however saying they are a hollow sympathizer is certainly worth mentioning. Take into consideration things that will actually be relevant to the story you’re telling and information other thread partners would want to see out of your character. This is where you justify the things you want to do.
Goals & Achievements: This is where you briefly talk about things your character has done in the past, or things they want to do. Please note that you cannot have had any previous position of notable power (such as lieutenant or captain), however mentioning that you were once a seated officer in a certain division is very relevant information. This is a very good place to start a foundation of your story and make notes on the general direction of where you want to go with your character. Above all else, keep your goals reasonable; it was be a little ludicrous to go out the gate wanting to be Captain Commander. However, feel free to update this as you progress, so players have easy access to your current plans and accomplishments.
[ GUARDIAN ANGEL ]
Aspect of Death: Sacrifice is a word that defines Grim's life as a human in one word. The young male spent all his life doing what he needed to do for his career and family even if he didn't like it, yielding any free time or hobbies he once had to take care of his sick mother and father. Leaving school early and forgoing a decent education the beasts entire existence pre-hollow was lived to serve others and fulfill their happiness while neglecting his own problems and illness. The sacrifice's Grim has made back then as a Human has now carried over to a Hollow, as the beast is a loyal dog that will fight for Las Noches until the bitter end, a sense of duty causes Grim to wander the barren sands defending those weaker than him even if it means sacrificing himself to save the day.
Power: A brief (1-2 sentences) summary of your power. This only needs to be as complex or as simple as you want it to be, but remember that the full write up belongs in your second post!
Zanpakutō: An empty blade that the Arrancar fight with. This weapon can come in just about any form and typically takes on a monstrous, or dangerous vibe. There is no standard, though typically it is a bladed weapon of some sort.
[ LEGACY CREATED ]
Origin: Each of these three sections should be at least a full paragraph (5-7 complete sentences). In your origin, you should talk about where your character was born, describe their death and talk about their time as a base Hollow. This should stop before your character has become conscious and is able to think about their actions.
Rise to Power: Rise to Power should include the road up to breaking the hollow mask as well as the logic behind doing that. During this phase is when you would talk about how your character has gotten use to being an Arrancar after being a monster for so long.
Call to Action: This is where you talk about the event(s) that made your character shift from an NPC to a player character. For whatever reason, they need to be pulled away from the daily grind and put into the spotlight. In this section, you’ll want to highlight that event(s) and justify why your character is they way they are today.
