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I'm blue.

Fuck.

I really enjoyed this. Great idea, haha.

Five color Javaid cycle, you clearly forgot something.

Five color Javaid cycle, you clearly forgot something.

I'd catch up on my Magic skills if this became a thing.

psst

I'm reading this post..

Wasn't there something with Aura? Like to give special effect like reach and the like? Are ya going to do Artifact Creature? AJ needs to know~ 

You have a typo in Severance's card, ultimate. I assume all of the '4th abilities' are passives applied to that planeswalker.

Hatred's +0 ability has a very strange wording, as is the loss of loyalty from damage isn't negated and you instead gain that amount back which is...strange. Preventing damage from even being assigned would be cleaner and accomplish the same thing unless you intended for this to also negate the damage in which case your wording doesn't convey that.

Penance's card is a bit weird because the Ultimate's token seems to flow right into the passive effect, not sure how you could really fix that though but it took a re-read for me to realize it wasn't an effect being granted by the token. Although that would be a cool mechanic frankly speaking, having every character have a non-Sovereign or Royal form which generates a token that only works when the respective planeswalker is one the field (enemy controlled or otherwise) but thats just absent minded thought...it would clean up the cards though to have only 3 abilities each.

Penance's ability also would, obviously, trigger on damage done to her through the controller which opens up a bit of design space for a card which has a lot of power but can trigger this effect in the deck (Ex. Delve X where X is the amount of life lost and damage dealt to Planeswalkers or creatures you control; assuming its the only Delve card in the set. Royal Guard card? Trash your planeswalkers for some Delve effect?)

Her ultimate is also not so great, doesn't sound like 'penance' since the cards can die the moment they come into play which means they haven't done a damn thing worth punishing. I think it'd be more interesting and flavorful if they gained a -1/-1 counter each time they were tapped or activated an ability. 

Penance's Command has improper wording, you gain indestructible and other cards with the same effect use that wording (Ex. Aegis Angel.) Artifact destruction is also off color and the card is crazy strong as is anyways (none of the other commands have any 'all' effects) although I admittedly know very little of the format and Obsession is also really good (you mean I get my negation and my card advantage for only 5 mana? yes, let us run away to paradise~) I also don't know about Nothing's command since negating activated abilities is strange, don't know what identity that belongs to...never seen it. Its also an Instant which is...why? It seems very Blue to me, not even remotely Green except for the fight effect which is generally a Sorcery ability for Green anyways as I know it. Red is Sorcery though despite Red being all about dat speed. Your colors are weird on these cards is what I'm saying.

Most of the command's clash with themselves, if you wrath yourself its pointless to gain indestructible or double strike, but maybe you intended it that way? I don't know how you'd word it but one effect after another one would probably work better since then, if you want, you can just use some of the command's to board wipe and spare your own creatures (Obsession's Command doesn't matter what order it happens in, the effects don't clash - its the cleanest card.) Course Hatred's Command is also the only one that doesn't mesh with the Planeswalker (second ability will board wipe Red's low Toughness creatures easily making the 4th effect of Command one that is never going to happen.) 

To be fair, Severance has the same self destructive problems but thats fine - thats plenty Black.

I'm gonna hit post on this for now.

You have a typo in Severance's card, ultimate.

I assume all of the '4th abilities' are passives applied to that planeswalker.

Hatred's +0 ability has a very strange wording, as is the loss of loyalty from damage isn't negated and you instead gain that amount back which is...strange. Preventing damage from even being assigned would be cleaner and accomplish the same thing unless you intended for this to also negate the damage in which case your wording doesn't convey that.

Penance's card is a bit weird because the Ultimate's token seems to flow right into the passive effect, not sure how you could really fix that though but it took a re-read for me to realize it wasn't an effect being granted by the token. Although that would be a cool mechanic frankly speaking, having every character have a non-Sovereign or Royal form which generates a token that only works when the respective planeswalker is one the field (enemy controlled or otherwise) but thats just absent minded thought...it would clean up the cards though to have only 3 abilities each.

Penance's ability also would, obviously, trigger on damage done to her through the controller which opens up a bit of design space for a card which has a lot of power but can trigger this effect in the deck (Ex. Delve X where X is the amount of life lost and damage dealt to Planeswalkers or creatures you control; assuming its the only Delve card in the set. Royal Guard card? Trash your planeswalkers for some Delve effect?)

Her ultimate is also not so great, doesn't sound like 'penance' since the cards can die the moment they come into play which means they haven't done a damn thing worth punishing. I think it'd be more interesting and flavorful if they gained a -1/-1 counter each time they were tapped or activated an ability.

Penance's Command has improper wording, you gain indestructible and other cards with the same effect use that wording (Ex. Aegis Angel.) Artifact destruction is also off color and the card is crazy strong as is anyways (none of the other commands have any 'all' effects) although I admittedly know very little of the format...

and Obsession is also really good (you mean I get my negation and my card advantage for only 5 mana? yes, let us run away to paradise~)

I also don't know about Nothing's command since negating activated abilities is strange, don't know what identity that belongs to...never seen it. Its also an Instant which is...why? It seems very Blue to me, not even remotely Green except for the fight effect which is generally a Sorcery ability for Green anyways as I know it.

Red is Sorcery though despite Red being all about dat speed. Your colors are weird on these cards is what I'm saying.

Most of the command's clash with themselves, if you wrath yourself its pointless to gain indestructible

or double strike, but maybe you intended it that way?

I don't know how you'd word it but one effect after another one would probably work better since then, if you want, you can just use some of the command's to board wipe and spare your own creatures (Obsession's Command doesn't matter what order it happens in, the effects don't clash - its the cleanest card.) Course Hatred's Command is also the only one that doesn't mesh with the Planeswalker (second ability will board wipe Red's low Toughness creatures easily making the 4th effect of Command one that is never going to happen.)

To be fair, Severance has the same self destructive problems but thats fine - thats plenty Black.